The police
I was watching dora the explorer i was 4 so don't judge me. I heard the gate open du du dulalala so i looked out the window and there were lots of police with the biggest guns ever. I screamed muuuum there's people in our garden. She said don't lie i said i'm not so she came and said get in the garage so we did we hanged out there for a bit and then they went a way.
Thursday, March 22, 2018
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Wow Eclipse that sounds so scary, I really like how you said what you were doing before hand, it helped me to create a picture in my mind. I wonder why the police were there? Next time you could use a Capital letter for the word 'I'.
ReplyDeletethe nighbors had guns
DeleteHi eclipse, I really like your story,but it was also kinda sacry. Hahaha I love it
ReplyDeletethank you karaitiana i know i hade to make it sceary
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