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Friday, March 23, 2018

Whoop poop

My Mum and Dad were having an adults only party but
my Mum and Dad let me come because i was a baby.
All my family were there and worst people i didn't even
know was there. There was a lot of good food well i
was a baby so i didn't really taste it because i licked it
it was nice. I spent most of the time in my bed it was
very loud my Daddy came and picked me up and said
this is my daughter eclipse and then gave me the
biggest hug ever and then out of know were an
avalunch of poop my sleeves and pans

1 comment:

  1. hi ecpilpse
    i really like how you used an avalunch.
    next time you could add whos house you were at like were you at you house or someting.
    i rember a time when i was just 3 my grandma had a party and i had an accadent in my pj pants

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